Monday, October 28, 2013

Post 10b: Production Progress

Due to our class critique, I have decided to update my story to display a greater challenge and draw out my characters personality. My premise and concept are still the same, as well as the color sheets. My new synopsis and storyboards are displayed below, and I have also added my final character design.

Synopsis: The story opens with a hunter walking up to the entrance of a cave that is located in a forest. The hunter's stomach growls, and he looks up at the cave. The cave looks very dark and spooky. The hunter proceeds to back up slowly in a scared manner. He decides to set a trap and wait for what's inside the cave to come out. He sets it runs behind a nearby rock to sleep. He ends up falling asleep for a short period of time. When he awakes, the hunter looks at his trap. Nothing has be caught. The hunter sighs and looks at the cave again. It shows the same shot of the entrance of the cave, still dark and scary. The hunter looks scared again. By this time we realize the hunter is afraid of the dark. The hunter's stomach growls once more, and he then decided he must go in. He finds two nearby sticks and rubs them together, catching one on fire. He enters the cave, holding his torch. He walks slow at first, shaking a bit. As he progresses further, he understands there is nothing to fear since he has his light. He begins to move normal, looking very happy. He then reaches the end of the cave, which is allowing some sunlight in. He pulls out his gun, aiming it towards a creature. The audience is then shown the creature he is pointing the gun at: A rabbit and her two little babies. After a long pause, the hunter lowers his weapon, and walks out of the cave.






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